How my end product compares to my preliminary exercise

At the beginning of the year we had to create a preliminary piece where we practiced using the cameras as well as practicing using the school editing software to see if we could make a real looking end product. The preliminary exercise had to include a match on action which I used a back gate for as well as a conversation between 2 people whilst using shot reverse shot on a 180 degree line. My preliminary exercise went well and I think I matched my shots up well. This preliminary exercise was good practice for my end product and helped me get used to thinking about my shots before I took them and showed me the importance of planning before I filmed my piece. It also helped me to start to get used to using editing software as I had never used it before. Since I am a year 14 student my preliminary exercise was deleted to save school memory, not realising that I was coming back for an extra year so my apologies that I cant upload my preliminary exercise.

I think that this was a necessary thing to do before filming my end product as it helped me get used to filming and editing my final product.
My final product was a vast improvement from my preliminary exercise as I used a great deal more shots that were edited together far more effectively to give a higher quality final result.
My final product was far more demanding in the fact that I had to design the editing based around the soundtrack I used where as I had far more freedom in my prelim.
And finally I believe that I make a far more effective and exciting final product than my prelim and I am proud of what I have made, my target audience seems to be pleased with what I have made which is my main focus of designing this piece. I think I have made a very detailed and effective horror film opening that uses many typical horror movie conventions to make this as effective and gripping as possible.